Ground Zero6 comic

Just read the comic and I must say, for those who enjoys the "goddess" side of the macro/size community, this is a must get. Why? Cause it involves all the kinks these fans enjoys (or most of them!). It includes the size difference power display, lots of foot stomping, crushing, worshiping, foot smell/licking, etc. It's a bundle of all those goddess and worshiping fans likes, so if you are one of those, then this is for you.
I must say, the artists involved in this comic sure had fun trying to emulate Eiichiro Oda's funny style, specially in the face expressions characteristic from his style. Also, if you are a One Piece fan, besides being a goddess fan, then you have an extra reason for getting this comic!

On my personal opinion, I found this comic a little rushed, specially when she was in the city, cause it goes straight to the goddess fan's kinks and doesn't develop that much other things that the size community enjoys a lot which is destruction of the city. Idk if it was for saving the extra work destruction comes along with, but a little more focus on how destructive is her stroll, it would be nice instead of being too rushed. I didn't see stomping nor destruction sequences which is a pity, since it's a neat size difference power display and crunchery. Still, it had some fun things to see like the footprints on the sea. Also, according to the character's personality, I can't say much since I'm not a One Piece fan, so I barely know some of the characters, but I think they were portrayed according to their personality. I can be wrong too, so idk.

Looking at the comic's composition, it was quite nice to see the different panel's execution, but I would like to see some panel breakers in future works for adding more innovation to the comic, and by panel breakers I mean part of the character breaking out of their panel.

Regarding the coloring work, it was really good. It isn't an easy task to color so many pages and it added more charm to the overall work, so I must congratulate THEDAIBIJIN for her contribution to this comic.

On the perspective work applied in this comic, I must say that sometimes it was a little too forced and the perspective of the character looked kinda funny and didn't follow too much the perspective of the buildings. I know it's hard to work with extreme perspective sometimes, I have this problem too with my own comics, but I try to do it as best as I can. I know it can be better, so keep practicing and working hard, guys! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="262" title="Thumbs Up"/>
Also, clever move on making the sea the main scenario, that way one can save work on drawing cities/town, haha. Clever move indeed!

Regarding the plot, as a macro/size comic artist, I can say this comic was too unbalanced and was too predictable to know what it would happen next, the main character is unstoppable, whatever you put in front of her would get decimated effortlessly, no real problem by dealing with the opposition and I know that is what power display is about, to show how hopeless the micros are compared to the macro, but when even the military force can't do a thing without even making her think on how to deal with all the opposition, it kinda makes the story boring. A good story need opposition, to put the main character into a position to make him/her think on how to deal with the problem and face it. Here, with the size shifting power to an unlimited range, she just stomped on everything she wanted, presenting no difficulties for her.

Anyway, in an overall view, if you are a goddess fan, then you must get this comic, it's a most, and if you are also a One Piece fan, then you have another reason to buy this comic.
If you are a One Piece fan and not a goddess fan, you may still want to buy this comic and see what it is about. It's worth a read since you could find it fun.
If you are a size fan but you don't enjoy goddess related stories, then I fear you may have a hard time reading this comic, since it focuses a lot on those kinks.
It's a good fun comic, I'm not a goddess fan but I enjoyed the way this comic was executed, the art quality is good but I know it could be better, and the coloring work adds a very appealing factor into play which may attract future costumers into buying this comic, but what I suggest is the artists involved in this comic, to keep practicing perspective, since they did a good work but it could be better, and mainly, for the story writer, to practice stories that are more fair between the macro and the micros, and at least, the micros could put the macro into some trouble and make it think on how to get out of there for making the story more interesting and less predictable.

Good job, guys. Keep practicing and thanks for letting me read this comic. I appreciate that you wanted me to review your comic. I hope I wasn't too harsh but I wanted to do a constructive critique showing the good points and where to improve.

Rating according to the entire comic, not the picture:

Vision: 4/5 - I think it tackled many kinks goddess fans really enjoy. Personally I don't but I can recognize which are the ones that these fans enjoys a lot.

Originality: 2.5/5 - I think it was loyal to the One Piece universe and the artists and story writer knew how to manage the characters into the universe, but the story was too predictable and was too biased on one side and didn't present any troubles for the main character. Not too original tbh and it wasn't that interesting. It can be better.

Technique: 3.5/5 - The techniques used in this comic were nicely executed but I saw many times the perspective was too forced on some panels and made the character look really funny. I see there still needs some practice in perspective drawing and foreshortening (these are very advanced techniques to dominate, so keep working guys! I'm still practicing it too, so you aren't alone!). The rest of the comic was nicely drawn, the characters, the ships, the city, had good quality, so congrats, guys!
The color added a very nice feel to the art and it was the entire comic in color, this is something you don't see in many comics, so great job.

Impact: 3/5 - As I said, the art quality was good, not the best, but was good and it can be improved. The coloring was good too, still it could be improved by adding some gradient shading in some big panels. What affected the impact points was the originality of the story since it was too unbalanced and predictable. It can be better with more practice.